Folks, we saw it coming. Another big fat R, citing voice. This agent said the voice was more tween than teen. (What does that mean exactly? Should I throw some cuss words in there??!)
This brings me down to one prospective agent (she's the one who requested the R&R months ago). Yanno what? I'm strangely OK with this. I'm happy and excited to be working on a re-draft of CHEAT. The opening chapter is already so much better -- snappier, quicker, less "drag-y." I've re-imagined some of my MCs and swapped out some lackluster characters taking up space for more defined ones. It's going to be good. Certainly, better, at minimum.
Work work work!